作文教学革命，改变学生的认知

去年的一个下午，我上完了语文课，教室里一片寂静，我拿着试卷，仔细地批改着学生的作文，一个女生的作文被我批得特别差，字迹潦草，内容空泛，我深吸一口气，反复推敲她的作文,最终决定改变这一现象。

那天，我看到班上其他学生的作文都获得了省级优秀奖，他们用优美的语言描绘了自己对学校的故事，用细腻的笔触描绘了校园的景致，我惊讶地发现，这些作文比我女生的作文更贴近学生的内心，更充满童真，原来，我一直在用传统的方式批改作文，而没有意识到作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文作文